Refactor this to active voice and explain why it is preferred

This tests spotting passive clauses and why active voice improves clarity. Answer: rewrite to "The script processes the data and sends it to the database," noting active voice is clearer and names the actor. Red flag: claiming passive is more professional.
This tests identifying passive constructions and articulating why active voice creates clearer technical docs. Answer: convert to "The script processes the data and sends it to the database," making the script the explicit actor. Then explain that active voice uses an actor-verb-target structure, producing sentences that are clearer, more direct, and usually shorter. Note that it removes ambiguity about who performs the action.
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